Dymarob's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[What the HELL is Mario Party DS Anti Piracy Screen (Part 2: Joey is SO desperate)]

I feel like you have potential with this style of video, but there are quite a few things that could use improvement.

For example, The music is too loud, and it can be hard to hear what you are saying.

The majority of the video shows nothing except your avatar, who hardly moves the entire time.

And I don't know what your render settings are, but there are a lot of video artifacts even on the highest resolution setting.

This doesn't feel entertaining to me. It feels more like a lecture.

If you can improve on these, I think you'll see big improvements on views.

AndriuxDev responds:

For one, I was thinking to move to Twitch and delete my Newgrounds so that things can become better, which I can't due to OS-related issues.

Two, I'm sorry if the video was awful. This may one of the many videos that will end my career this year.

Three, for Newgrounds standards, FNF deserves a second video about what happened with Sky. If you have BBPanzu's discord, I can talk to him/her and get more information for that video.

[Super Mario Bros. Z (Episode 2)]

IT'S ACTUALLY HERE!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
HOLY FUCK!!! OH MY GOD! HOLY SHIT FUCK ASS FUCK!!!

FUUUUUUUUCK!!!!

I never thought this would happen. I never thought I'd see the day this series came back.
I had to text an old friend of mine that it finally happened.
Thank you, Mr. Haynes! You made me as happy as I was when I was 13/14/15, and I watched the original series.

I'm sorry I lost hope. Thank you for persevering through every setback. You've made me, a friend of mine, and many other people happy.

Holy fuck!

[The Ultimate Showdown]

Good lord has this aged.
I'm still giving it a 5, because this is a moment in history, and I loved this when I was younger.
But, woof! This has aged.

[Casting Call]

You know what? I think you're gonna do juuuuuust fine.

[Shrimps McGee]

It feels great knowing that someone as talented as Harry Partridge used to draw like shit. I mean, this actually isn't bad, but in comparison to what he does now, it looks like shit.
It's crazy what you can accomplish when you just keep at it.

[1 - The Story of Khale]

Dude, I remember when this was brand new. It was amazing. It still holds up quite well too. Shame episode 3 never came out, but I'm sure that isn't from lack of trying.
Good luck to you and whatever you're working on now.

[Creeper, Aww man - Flipaclip animation]

I was getting into this, but then it just suddenly ends.
If this passes judgement, I'd be shocked.
You'd have way better chances if you had actually finished this.

[Ricky and Mor-Mor]

If there was meant to be a joke in there, I didn't find it.
This just seemed to be bad impressions for the sake of bad impressions.
I like Rick and Morty as much as the next person, but liking something isn't enough for a pass here.

Also, when you scream into a mic, do it from farther away, you'll get better sound quality.

WinterSpray responds:

ok, I know its been a while since this was posted, but I will make changes in the future

[Jay Theme]

It started off amazing, but then nothing happened.
It was well-drawn, and the music was nice, but putting them together felt pointless, It didn't really add anything.
If this had some cool scenes in it, I absolutely would have given this a higher score, but literally all he did was stand there for a minute and a half.

UnidentifiedCanid responds:

This was more a proof of concept type deal, I get he didn't do anything, and I would have done more but I had yet to animate anything close to this. Especially with the walkcycle and smearframes. Never did anything like that, but my friend had a theme song and I just smacked it in since it fit well enough, largely this was experimental, but in time I hope to do more animation stuff of a quality you spoke of.

[The Backstory]

Pretty Good.
I have some problems with it, but those are just a matter of opinion stuff, so I won't go into that.

The only main criticism I have is that your voice is too quiet. I don't know if you're mumbling or if your mic is just quiet, but if you can fix that the next time you make something, I think that would help a little.

Reaxx responds:

Thanks for the honest criticism I really appreciate it.

yeah the mic input was just low for some reason

I wlll fix that next time

thanks

:)